Maura, on September 7 you sent four rounds of notes about the site. This page walks through every one of them. For each change you will see your own words asking for it, what the page looked like before, and what it looks like now.
There are two parts. First, everything that is done. Then the short list of things we have held back, each with a question for you.
Thirteen of your requests. Ten of them changed something on a page, and you can see each one below. Three needed an answer rather than an edit.
The opening description on your home page is now the shorter version you wrote, the one that begins “spatial medicine in motion”. The longer version you sent stays available on the What Is AST page, so nothing you wrote is lost.
The link is in, worded exactly as you wrote it, and it goes to the What Is AST page. We kept your wording rather than shortening it to something like “Learn more”, because the words inside a link tell Google a great deal about the page it points to, and yours nearly match that page’s own heading.
Attunement, Alignment and Embodiment now appear on the home page as three short lines with a link, and the four long paragraphs you wrote about them now close the What Is AST page. This is a move, not a cut. Every word you wrote is still on your site, just on the page where you said it belongs.
Your new copy is in, including the Tom Myers passage on spatial medicine, with Myers named inside your own sentence so a reader knows immediately whose words they are. Your punctuation is preserved exactly as you typed it.
Your longer version is in, the one that carries the spiral fascial lines, the developmental shapes, and the closing line about a baby held and shaped in the womb. You sent two versions of this section that night. We used the later one, because it is the one that adds the womb line.
The heading and the paragraph underneath it are both yours now: the fabric, gravity, and the practitioner. You were right that the old version described three things under a heading that said two.
Your replacement copy is in on the training page.
Both sections are off the public page: the tying instructions and the full washing and care routine. That is 173 words, and none of them are deleted. They are saved whole, exactly as written, ready to drop into whatever you send a buyer after they order.
Michelle’s name now links to her own site in both places she appears. Her credentials were already correct in all three places they show, so those were left alone. A named teacher with a real site behind her name carries more weight with a reader, and with anything checking whether she is real.
You answered our question, so the two sentences on your site that make a claim about your professional experience now both say since 2005. We used the year rather than a count on purpose: “21 years” is wrong again next January, and nobody ever remembers to update it. A year stays true.
The two sentences that changed
“Maura brings over 20 years of professional bodywork experience to the training, with a lineage spanning structural integration, craniosacral therapy, Thai and Osteo-Thai bodywork under master teachers, and somatic psychedelic facilitation.”
“Suspended and fully held, you meet two decades of attuned bodywork experience.”
“Maura has been a professional bodyworker since 2005 and brings that experience to the training, with a lineage spanning structural integration, craniosacral therapy, Thai and Osteo-Thai bodywork under master teachers, and somatic psychedelic facilitation.”
“Suspended and fully held, you meet attuned bodywork experience built since 2005.”
Checked, and there is nothing to change. That page carries no price of any kind and already invites people to reach out directly.
You already answered it yourself. Your home page version is the short teaser and your What Is AST version is longer and differently worded. That is better than either repeating it or dropping one. When two of your own pages answer the same question in nearly the same words, Google has to pick one, and it may not pick the one you would have.
Noted and on the record. All three were already named correctly, so nothing on the site needed to change. We just wanted your yes in writing before launch, and now we have it.
Five things we have deliberately not done yet. Four of them need a word from you. The fifth is work in progress on our side.
Both are yours, forty-eight minutes apart, and they point opposite ways. You are the only person who can say which one you meant, so we stopped here rather than guessing. Nothing was changed either way.
There is a cost to consider before you answer. That section is currently the only place your home page explains how the work actually works: the fabric, gravity, the fascial lines, the access from every angle. Your home page is the one that gets visited most, and it is the one an AI assistant is most likely to quote when someone asks “what is aerial somatic therapy”. If the section comes off entirely, the home page says you do spatial medicine in motion and then sends the reader elsewhere to find out what that means. Most visitors are fine with that. The machines that answer questions about you have less to work with.
We think the 10:34 version is what you meant, and we would like to keep two or three sentences of the mechanism on the home page rather than none, so the page still answers “what is this” for someone who never clicks through.
Does that work, or do you want it fully gone?
This one did not come from your list. We noticed it while we were in there and want your call on it.
Every page has a button in the top corner, and on your live site it says Book a Session. That button does not open a calendar. It opens your contact form, so what actually happens is that someone writes you a message and waits to hear back. A button that promises booking and delivers a message form loses people at the exact moment they had decided to act.
Which do you want on the button?
If none of those sound like you, tell us the words you want and we will use yours.
They are not lost. Your original site is saved in full, every page of it, and the complete testimonials are in there.
Here is what needs fixing. When those quotes were carried across to the new site they were shortened into pull-quotes. The full versions run to around 1,959 words between them. What is on your site now is about 477 words. So roughly three quarters of what your students actually said about you is sitting in the archive instead of on your site, which is exactly backwards.
We are restoring all nine at full length. This is in progress on our side and does not need anything from you.
Taking the tying and washing sections off that page left a gap, so there is now a single line standing where they were:
“Setup, tying and care instructions are sent to you with your swing.”
Those are our words, not yours, which is why we are not putting them up without asking. It is also a small promise made on your behalf, so it should say what you actually intend to do.
Is that sentence right, or would you rather word it yourself?
And a related one: your tying and washing instructions are saved and ready, but there is nowhere yet for a buyer to receive them. Do you want that to be an email that goes out automatically when someone orders, or a page only buyers can reach? Either is straightforward. We just need to know which.
In your layout for the What Is AST page you marked two sections as unchanged: Gravity as a Therapeutic Tool and Two Expressions, One Modality. We compared the text you pasted against what is on those pages now, and they are not quite the same. The differences are small, a line here and there, and they look like the sort of thing that happens when you paste from an older draft rather than a deliberate edit.
Because you marked them unchanged, we left those two sections alone and did not retype anything. Retyping is how a writer’s words quietly get altered, and we will not do that to yours.
Do you want those two sections left exactly as they are on the site, or swapped for the versions you pasted? If you are not sure, we can send you both versions side by side and you can pick.
Answer the questions in part two whenever you have a moment. A reply to our email is plenty, and you can take them one at a time. Nothing needs to be formal.
Once we have your answers, all of part one goes up at once, along with whatever part two turns into. Your site will change in a single step rather than in pieces, which keeps the whole thing coherent and means you only have to look at it once.
If anything above is not what you had in mind, or something reads wrong to you, say so. Your words are yours. We will change it back or change it again, however many times it takes to get it right.
Prepared for Maura Rassman, September 10, 2026. This page is private and is not listed anywhere. Nothing shown here is on the live site yet.